Ode to Rain

a lyric poem in the form of an address to a particular subject, often elevated in style or manner and written in varied or irregular meter.

When it rains

I feel in pain

Cause while it poured

I felt so bored

 

But yet I am proud

That earth has all the watered clouds

All those cotton balls up above

Fill the ocean with great love

 

So while it may not glow

The rain will make rainbows

Author's Note

For my final in english i have to share my writing and writing skills to an audience that is not the class and then receive feedback from it. so i would love to hear what people think. PLEASE comment