Another Girl, Not Important
A Book by hannah
 My life story.  © 2012 hannah
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My first story I hope you enjoy sorry for bad grammer
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Though there are indeed a lot of grammar mistakes, the overall flow of this story seems genuine. Don''t worry so much about the faults, as long as you get your message across. Just perhaps used Microsoft word and spell check if grammar mistakes become too overwhelming.
Good write though. You did a nice job at showing the transitions of time thought in the day. ^__^
Posted 12 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Awesome first story!!!!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Though there are indeed a lot of grammar mistakes, the overall flow of this story seems genuine. Don''t worry so much about the faults, as long as you get your message across. Just perhaps used Microsoft word and spell check if grammar mistakes become too overwhelming.
Good write though. You did a nice job at showing the transitions of time thought in the day. ^__^
Posted 12 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on March 6, 2012
Last Updated on March 8, 2012
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Im not the best writer, but i like writing what im exicted about. more..
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