Crash crash burn...

Crash crash burn...

A Poem by Stef Outsiders

Crash crash burn
I can't remember
what love feel's like
I am too scared
to even try

Crash crash burn
An empty feeling
follows
you may not understand me
the heart will still yearn
but if my soul dies 
within your arms

Don't let your heart crash
Don't let your soul burn..

© 2011 Stef Outsiders


Author's Note

Stef Outsiders
Err... yeah... I think I might need a day rehab...

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I think many people have felt like that at some time in their life, and they will readily identify with this poem. A well-penned piece, with an edgy feel to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Nah. You don't need rehab. Your good as you are. And this poem is terific. Small typo in first stanza (scared) I think. Brilliant job though, with great momentum and terrifying content. Poems like this show, just how damn good you are

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 8, 2011
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Stef Outsiders
Stef Outsiders

United Kingdom



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Hi everyone I am writer but still have a long way to go, have been writing for four years now, i like to read, love art, photography drawing and designing! I'm 26 years old, have two beautiful ch.. more..

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