Forever Blue, Forever black..

Forever blue

Forever black

I can't understand

or why I feel

you gave me reason's

and I believed the story's

you kissed my lip's

Now

I can't leave it at that...

Author's Note

TAR DA!!.... random...

Reviews

You made definitly through a short poem, everything so clear. Great job! Love the colored expressions, wich make it true and vivid! xx

[EMF]

A tour de force. Powerful and passionate. In just a few words you ave said much more than many could in several hundred pages. It's like an icepick to the brain and equally as chilling. Behind the hurt, love and anguish, there is the underlying threat. Stunning.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love betrayed can have a lasting and surreal effect... very expressive in such few words.

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random but effective! : )