"I lied Kid"

A metal tear drop

fall's from the sky

it's weight

like a feather

kisses the palm 

of my hand

it's no ordinary tear

it's one made for me

one that fit's

in the barrel 

of my gun

I point

my real tears follow

there you are

show no mercy

show no sorrow

I loved you

you will never

have another tomorrow

don't stare

don't dare say 

I am damaged goods

please just shoot me now

come on!!

we both know 

who will die

you promised you would

"I lied kid"

Author's Note

Just random... psychotic kid... I think .. and a man...

Yes I am coo coo... really... lol

Reviews

[Nate]

Considering I live in my mind I'm partial to cerebral works. In addition, I do like tag lag lines embedded in titles. Good job!

[SkinlessFrank]

Yes, there's the sense of psyhco-betrayal here. Even we do not know what we are about when we feel this way.

[sivan]

this is kinda psychotically entrancing...

[Lily Mae]

I like it too but I'm already dead...Lily Mae has been bumped off lol ;)xx

[EMF]

I like it Kid. Like it a lot. Kill you later... or not