Under your waterfall of bad love

I am drowning

Under your waterfall of bad love

I can't seem to get it right

not strong enough

no will to fight

I am drowning

My words gurgle

reaching out because I hurt

but you push me back

Under your waterfall of bad love..

Author's Note

It's a chorus of a song I thought of... hmmm...

Reviews

[EMF]

I can really see this working as a song. It's got a great feel about it. I have the blues playing in my head. Nothing unusual there though. A cracking theme and real well structured. Love it

[Liam]

Sometimes it's good to get out of the water, dry off and get a new perspective. :D

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Very sad actually , if real or not ... when you feel that you dont receive the true love you wish , need ... when you dont feel the file inside anymore ... thats when you need to go

[Jibey]

Sometimes the crashing weight of the water is just too much... The image works well here