Do I tell before it's too late?

When one mind is alike

and the soul is driven 

he believes in fate

and I remain optimistic.. 

I don't want to get hurt

though I feel the same

I feel we have something deeper

but objects stand in the way..

Do I tell him anyway?

Do I tell him before it's too late?

My emotions are strong

it's hard to keep it at bay

it is worth destroying what he already has

know where his heart might lay..

were soul mates he tells me

I wish we would have met

in another time

not here were complications rise..

Author's Note

Feelings for another... complicated.

Reviews

[EMF]

A stunning poem about complicaation. The flow is sheer perfection and structure likewise. A wonderfully complex poem about some complex emotions. Only one wee typo. Insignificant next to the quality here. Loved it

[Jibey]

Mmm... hard.. You present the dilemma that many encounters create... :-(

[Lily Mae]

Ouch..when they use soul mate how can that not tug at your heart and soul.. Follow your heart..xxx