Looking for something deeper...

It's been long time

since I have felt

a journey of a life time

you know the ones

you read in a book

i guess 

it doesn't exist

no one is ever going 

to love me like that

I want to give up

looking for something deeper

but i don't

I've had it once

 for the wrong reasons

now am older

wiser

I want it again

but for the right reasons

someone to love me

like a lion loves it lamb

pour his heart out 

and the world did not matter

just me

where is it?

that something deeper

I guess

I am a fond dreamer

it only exists in books...

 

Author's Note

ugh... dunno

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ot exists... just hard to find... I think too often we are to caught up in life to notice.

[EMF]

As poems go, there are few poets who can bring a tear to my eye. You have. Heartfelt and powerful.

[Eagle Cruagh]

If you suspect you have found the one,
Talk to him about it. He won`t know if
you don`t tell him.
You are a gifted writer and your pieces
are very believable. Let it all out, don`t
hold back.
I love your writiing, it is heartfelt and
genuine.
---E-agle Cruagh

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[Mauricio Montoya]

A journey of life is a book deep inside our souls and time invites change when we learn. Our wants and desires are hard to find because they only exist in our hearts. great job in putting this together perfect ending.

[Dark Beauty]

I like it,you could've used stanzas to break up the poem and maybe a question mark at the end of it because you never know where you'd find your something deeper! Nice words for the piece too!