Don't understand...

You're life is better off without me

I have to move on

Can't stay another minute

the pain is too strong

I thought you loved me

But this painting is wrong

 

I have listened carefully

to yours and mine

I could feel it too

from under the palm of my hand

No use being happiness pretenders

Our souls are out of sync

and the harmony is not there anymore

 

You don't understand

the rheum of my heart

we have been beating out of time

for too long

let it go

before our worlds fall deeper into the dark

you need to protect what is yours

I need to protect mine

you don't understand

the rheum of my heart

 

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

its hard to come to terms when reality set in its good to get those feelings out.Great job, well done.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Your poem is so well done. It seems like a painting,
a landscape whee there was no earth or trees.
It seem heartfelt, but I believe that you were thinking
about how it might have been, with no intention of
breaking up.
A brilliant poem and the feeling is unmistakeable.
You have either been through this before, or perhaps
it is just your incredible imagination.
Love your writing, your expression.
------Eagle Cruagh

[KAREN]

Good to have you back frist of all! Your poem is heartfelt and full of emotion, nice flow and well written.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sad emotions, but this happens alot with relationships! Your imagery brought so much out in this well written poem!

[SpokenWord]

Sigh indeed it is horrible when relationships meet an end like this but honesty works best and helps acceptance of a new love in the future. One can only hope this is fiction writing and not writing of the heart. I can tell by the flow it is strongly felt and written very moving write!