Life is world war three...

I begin to think

my life was a mistake

it just does not

listen...

I seem to have

one or the other

never in between

and I hate it

for that...

It purposely avoids

what I want most

being loved

adored...

But my life can't give me that

can't let my family be happy

for me

someone has to hate someone

whether it's my dad

or my fiance...

It hurts to accept

that my life

is world war three...

Author's Note

I wish I can explain it better how I'm feeling right now. But I just cant. If I could, it wouldn't be much a poem, more of a bundle words.

Reviews

[Karina Longo]

Wow. I find it very poetical, even if you say it's more like a rant. I love it. "Life is world war three", it reminds me of my poem Walking Targets when there's a life saying "Word War III lives inside you and me", so obviously I love the title, haha. But all is great, I really like it, your writing style catches me eye big time. ;)

[Angela]

I think you have the beginning of something great. Try writing emotions and occurrences down during the day. I would love to see you finish this out. You have something here. "It just does not listen" I love that.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think the biggest war goes on between our own heart and mind... I understand where you are coming from... just when you think things are going well something else has to throw it off track. Why can't we all just get along.

[highthought]

maybe u re playing the wrong song around
check ur songs box
u ll find the right rythem
play it on time
and surely to the right guy

[Jeff]

Your frustration is showing very well. Sometimes you have to get the words out to the rest of it to flow.

[Morning Star]

Amen to that,no need to explain your words
Captured all images and emotions
I aways imagine that life is like a rollercoaster
its not an easy ride
though life goes on and on
Your word are fill with so much wisdom
Brilliant write

[Tate Morgan]

such a sad epitaph I hope for you it changes

[Gone]

You have explained it well enough for us to feel your frustration and pain. Sometimes I wish life was a bit more like NCIS in that we could just give people a 'Gibbs slap' and correct peoples behaviour. Unfortunately we cannot truly take away free will and so the innocent suffer. We hear you Stephanie.

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A heartbreaking and emotional poem full of pain and honesty. It can be a nightmare when people you spend so much time with and care about, are all at odds with one another. Its a poem many people or if not everyone can relate to in some way. A brave, powerful and heartfelt piece.

[Poeticpiers]

you explain very well M'lady. But happines is self generated you cant rely on others to make you happy