Life is world war three...

Life is world war three...

A Poem by Stef Outsiders

I begin to think
my life was a mistake
it just does not
listen...

I seem to have
one or the other
never in between
and I hate it
for that...

It purposely avoids
what I want most
being loved
adored...

But my life can't give me that
can't let my family be happy
for me
someone has to hate someone
whether it's my dad
or my fiance...

It hurts to accept
that my life
is world war three...

© 2011 Stef Outsiders


Author's Note

Stef Outsiders
I wish I can explain it better how I'm feeling right now. But I just cant. If I could, it wouldn't be much a poem, more of a bundle words.

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Wow. I find it very poetical, even if you say it's more like a rant. I love it. "Life is world war three", it reminds me of my poem Walking Targets when there's a life saying "Word War III lives inside you and me", so obviously I love the title, haha. But all is great, I really like it, your writing style catches me eye big time. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think you have the beginning of something great. Try writing emotions and occurrences down during the day. I would love to see you finish this out. You have something here. "It just does not listen" I love that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think the biggest war goes on between our own heart and mind... I understand where you are coming from... just when you think things are going well something else has to throw it off track. Why can't we all just get along.

Posted 13 Years Ago


maybe u re playing the wrong song around
check ur songs box
u ll find the right rythem
play it on time
and surely to the right guy


Posted 13 Years Ago


Your frustration is showing very well. Sometimes you have to get the words out to the rest of it to flow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amen to that,no need to explain your words
Captured all images and emotions
I aways imagine that life is like a rollercoaster
its not an easy ride
though life goes on and on
Your word are fill with so much wisdom
Brilliant write

Posted 13 Years Ago


such a sad epitaph I hope for you it changes

Posted 13 Years Ago


You have explained it well enough for us to feel your frustration and pain. Sometimes I wish life was a bit more like NCIS in that we could just give people a 'Gibbs slap' and correct peoples behaviour. Unfortunately we cannot truly take away free will and so the innocent suffer. We hear you Stephanie.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A heartbreaking and emotional poem full of pain and honesty. It can be a nightmare when people you spend so much time with and care about, are all at odds with one another. Its a poem many people or if not everyone can relate to in some way. A brave, powerful and heartfelt piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


you explain very well M'lady. But happines is self generated you cant rely on others to make you happy

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Stef Outsiders
Stef Outsiders

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Hi everyone I am writer but still have a long way to go, have been writing for four years now, i like to read, love art, photography drawing and designing! I'm 26 years old, have two beautiful ch.. more..

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