Who are you?- two

As this stranger came near

the face still remains

a blur

all I saw were these hands

reaching fourth...

I froze as the tip's

of the finger's

trail the shape of my 

face

they were soft

and sent my mind into

a wondering haze...

I closed my eye's

as they continued

"Who are you?"

I asked again

but louder

than I realized...

The finger's suddenly

seized my hand's

I was pulled

towards this blur

they were warm

and scarily

strong...

I opened my eye's

and came face to face with another

they were green

incase with milk chocolate

 pretty and

made my heart flutter 

like a feather...

I lowered my eye's

now they were level

with lip's

fairly full and pink

strangely inviting 

they caused me to think...

They partly open

and felt this small

stream of scented air

"I'm someone, my name does

not need to be said"

odd word's carry

from these lip's...

"You do not know me

but in time you will"

My hearts goes crazy

just by the sound

of this deep chime...

"We met once 

but it was merely a few seconds

I saw you as we brushed

shoulders

and instantly knew,

oddly as it sounds

I fell in love with you"

My eye's widened

to what my ears were hearing

I desperately crush them

together

because I wanted to see his face...

Reviews

[Timtim]

I'd love that the person you fell in love with be something like milk or an object. I love the ending... leaves room for interpretation :)

[A]

Started off mysteriously interesting, makes you wonder really... Good work, keep it up.

[Jeff]

Very interesting. I like where this is going.

[SpokenWord]

A poem continued and the plot has thickened with more questions. First observation that must of been some brush this guy had with the main character, I bet she is beautiful! :) (evil grin) Just couldn't resist that one!!

I am wondering is this guy real, is he her imagination or is he dead because he seems to have supernatural powers and powers over women like a vampire. I see the mystery you are still brewing here, as we wonder who is this man. Very good writing!

[Mauricio Montoya]

the dream becomes a reality, the words you choose to describe allows me to see and feel, wow It comes together beautifully.
Excellent write.