In your eyes...

There is something in you're eyes

Something wrong

They tell a dark story

Maybe keep a secret

No use saying you can trust me

you've already made up your mind

There something in those eyes

You may think it is nothing

thought you cant hide it

No need to lie

at least tell me I' am right

There is something in you're eyes...

Author's Note

Poof... Random again... lol

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Eyes are the window to the soul like they say.

[Stanley Wilson]

loved it short but says lots

[Jeff]

The eyes are the window to the soul.

[R J Askew]

Ach, you are right. The eyes betray much, too much sometimes. But it is good that we can read it. It is the ones with dead eyes or cold eyes that are difficult as who knows what they are?

[MOON]

Eyes are the windows of the soul. Beautiful write.

[rosemary keogh]

Thats bill. love it.

[Swati]

Very nicely written. I like it. Keep going......

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is Bold work. The look in these eyes scares me almost as much as what may be behind them. This work gives me chills.

[SmileOfARebel]

Interesting. Its not the type of poem I see normally. I like it. Its different. Eyes are truly the mirrors to the soul. They could betray your intentions and thoughts in a mere second. You portrayed this fact rather well when you written, "Something wrong. They tell a dark story." Each of us have a story to tell. Good work.

[Bridger Hall]

I love this poem! i relate to it...

maybe keepING a secret...

keep posting i love your style.