In your eyes...

There is something in you're eyes

Something wrong

They tell a dark story

Maybe keep a secret

No use saying you can trust me

you've already made up your mind

There something in those eyes

You may think it is nothing

thought you cant hide it

No need to lie

at least tell me I' am right

There is something in you're eyes...

Author's Note

Poof... Random again... lol

Reviews

[Jibey]

A wondering reflection... somehow it is hard to know the depths...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You've keep me reading as a reader... so I guess there's something that caught my eyes... but can I suggest something... If you're going to go with apostrophe or no " ", choose one... and I believe you want to use the word, "Though", instead of "Thought"... and as a writer... we are always confused at times with, "you're" and your"... Thanks for sharing...

[Hotwater]

Yes, we can always tell... though we can misread too!
*bird*

[Angela]

The eyes are truly the window to the soul. I love how you state "you've already made up your mind" Sounds like there could be more here. Tell me does she go ahead anyway as we know she must or is she a smart one who runs for her life....

[highthought]

if u ve felt me well u ll know
roses are here even on snow
u were the one till u said "no
i wont take u all
i have old life to stay with me and more"

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love your radom poems! Beautifully done!

[Rossen]

The best poems feel like just letting go, I think so
great writing! please pass the cream.

100/100

[OT]

oh a little ominous!! something hidden in the eyes - a glint of what? a lie? or worse? lots of possibilities - what are they hiding! nice!

[Just Charles]

Hmm, I wish I could take a look into the eyes the narrator is discussing. Good poem!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

:) this is nice , eyes ... the mirror to the soul ... can never lie