In your eyes...

There is something in you're eyes

Something wrong

They tell a dark story

Maybe keep a secret

No use saying you can trust me

you've already made up your mind

There something in those eyes

You may think it is nothing

thought you cant hide it

No need to lie

at least tell me I' am right

There is something in you're eyes...

Author's Note

Poof... Random again... lol

Reviews

[Moflo]

This was a very strongly worded piece, and I think that helps your message very nicely. Great write, I liked it!

[Liza]

a magnetic draw of the eyes to the connect your souls - wonder full

[emmajoy]

Words to wonder by: eyes can speak more than words themselves. You write with your heart here tho' a few typos; but, nonetheless, your poem's finely written and in a sad way, unforgettable in theme.

[Seashell]

The soul is shown through the eyes. When I look in to someone's eyes...I can see hidden pain and sorrow, happiness and joy, lies and secrets....yet loyalty too. It's when you get it wrong you want to scream "go get contact lenses"...lol
You just want to know you got it right.
So if one sees something in someone elses eyes....they're not seeing nothing!!
This was thought provoking
Thanks for share
Babs x

[White Ink]

hmm.. did you mean (There is something in "your" eyes) ??

anyways, i enjoyed reading this :)

[Jvl narasimharao]

Our eyes tell the truth.There is a great delicacy in your poem

[Luke Ritta]

great write...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It is true that the eyes can tell a lot about a person. We must learn to trust our instincts.

[Mauricio Montoya]

random or not this piece in very insightful for the words ring so true.
Excellent write.

[EMF]

Breathtakingly good. Wonderfully dark and mysterious. It may be random, but it is superb