In your eyes...

There is something in you're eyes

Something wrong

They tell a dark story

Maybe keep a secret

No use saying you can trust me

you've already made up your mind

There something in those eyes

You may think it is nothing

thought you cant hide it

No need to lie

at least tell me I' am right

There is something in you're eyes...

Author's Note

Poof... Random again... lol

Reviews

[Commanda Panda]

Eyes hold so much emotion. They tell great stories, and speaking of how eyes portray the truth is so deep. I liked it.

[Arabdha]

Random..yet very specific ! The eyes portray a betrayal that shatters your dream..yet its just all in the eyes !

[M.E.Lyle]

Perhaps it's only a speck of dust. Do we somtimes try to read into something more than there is. The eyes are the pathways into our souls, but are they always right? I don't know what that means...but I'm sure it means something...to someone...somewhere. I like your wording and your message. it tells a "dark story."

[Seshat Nidaba]

Not the usual eyes story, I like it.

[Lily Mae]

The eyes are the key to the soul.. perfectly written Steph..xo

[Art Sun]

to see the truth...look into the eyes... and then look further, nice work

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

That's really powerful piece .. and can relate .. the eyes don't lie .. no matter what you say ..
keep writing :) xxx

Yes, there is... always, something, to translate wow.... I love your write.
Thanks for sharing. Ways of thinking, longing of sinking deeper, days of wondering, and even anger, fear, even lost, and life, all can be written in the eyes... of time...

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the eyes,the eyes....always tell a story ...eventually : )

[Brandon]

im going to use all capitals do say what i feel about this hope you dont mind.
I F*****G LOVE THIS!!!!