Because of you...

Because of you...

A Poem by Stef Outsiders

Roses are blue
Violets are red
Wait..
I got it backwards
all because of you...

See what you do to me
I can't think straight
my words don't come out right
all because of you...

You laugh
I blush
I feel so embarrassed 
God I feel like a fool
all because of you...

You tell me it's OK
when i know its not
I wanted this to be perfect 
but I guess I lost the plot

All because... I love you...

© 2011 Stef Outsiders


Author's Note

Stef Outsiders
RaNdOm Again... well it is Valentines soon... not that i'm looking forward to it... =D

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loose cute loving poem, smile

Posted 13 Years Ago


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this can be read as positive or negative which I like - it can be stumbling and breatheless because of the love - or more bitter - depressive almost - "I can't think straight" - "lost the plot" - because of the love! nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


The beginning was striking... the rest of the poem, was... how do girls love to term it... yes, it was sweet :) hope u have a lovely valentines...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hallmark eat your heart out! This would go great on a card, awesome write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think it's a great love poem! Grear job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like this one
specially the first part...
and Happy Valentines!

Posted 13 Years Ago


See what you do to me
I can't think straight
My words don't come out right
all because of you
To me this for stanzas says it all
your in love!
Excellent play of words,flow and tone
Stunning love poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved that first part. Nice bit of comedy!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Roses are blue
Violets are red
Wait..
I got it backwards
all because of you...

I loved this part,
This is wonderful.


Posted 13 Years Ago


LOL, cute...a play with words on all old poetic line...I'll be alone on valentines, but that's not a bad thing...I thing valentines can be over rated, yet with the right person, it can be a fulfilling, as well. Its a double edge sword, at times. Oh well.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 10, 2011
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Stef Outsiders
Stef Outsiders

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Hi everyone I am writer but still have a long way to go, have been writing for four years now, i like to read, love art, photography drawing and designing! I'm 26 years old, have two beautiful ch.. more..

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