Shouldn't be here but...

Sat in the car

here with my desire

the one I never notice before

only till a few days ago

something just clicked

I couldnt understand what

then came my dirty thoughts...

Danger, secrects and lies

I'm never normally like this

I have no reason

to desire another

do I feel bad

oddly, no

though I love the man I'm with

I also want the one I cannot have

sitting here

our lips just inches apart

I shouldn't be here but...

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Deep...oh dilemma's in life...I know this situation, well, lol...a lovely read that I can relate too.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

This is really beautiful ... true or fiction its powerful poem ... could feel the sin through your words :) ... Yossi

[OT]

the pull of desire and temptation!! to fight it or surrender to it? hmm - nice poem!

[Art Sun]

desire can be such a tempting emotion...nice work on this short expression of thought...

[Jeff]

Great job on this piece. You displayed the inner turmoil perfectly!

[Timtim]

And you think you're an amateur... you belittle yourself too much. This is a beautiful piece.

[A]

Totally descriptive of inner secret desires, that sometimes we're not even aware of but they come suddenly, love can be unreasonable and you can't always feel bad when it's wrong, liked it, keep it up!

[steph]

This is a sexy poem, one of inner desires, struggles, and passions somtimes forbidden.. Very nice piece... It really piqued my interest