Back where you started!

Life can be cold, life can be bright

you just got reach out, and grabbed it, right!

Look forward, never look back

cause if you walk backwards, you can't see where your going

and could end up back where you started!

Author's Note

RrAaDdOoMm!

Reviews

[Jim Parson]

Words to the wise! I don't know if it was your intention, but this made me smile.

[A]

Very true, Life can be really cold! we always should leave the dreadful events and thoughts behind, we should always look forward to the future and turn our back to the past, so we watch our coming steps while not making the same mistakes
i really liked this, very simple and true, well-said.

[Art Sun]

nice work...even have a lesson of life to add...enjoyed...

[Jeff]

Very good piece. It kind of makes you spin around a bit.

[steph]

This is a good piece, so true. So so true

[KAREN]

Loved this, and oh so true! Great write!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I like it! I think it has excellent meaning to it! Makes you think!

[Nothing Personal]

I like where it takes me..I wanna move ahead..Short, quick and sorta funny in a diff way..

[Gone]

Had to read this twice before I got it. Maybe if you reword it, you could make it flow better. I got caught on the tenses in the second line and the last two could do with a little work. Having said that those things may well be deliberate, in which case I have probably missed it completely.