BAD MEN

I wrote this through a time i almost ended up hating a certain man in my life...

It is bad men who can't control there dicks while others keep it locked up just for you

It is bad men that compare the parts you hate while others love them because there parts of you

It is bad men that don't know what it is like to love someone so they continue to pretending that they do

while others give a feeling like your the only girl in the world,

It is bad men that give good men a reputation cos they lie and want to re- deem their redemption. 

Author's Note

Ok, so its not great but i was spitting when i wrote this... lol

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

spitting? LOL yes you were angry I see the red in the black ink. I wouldn't want to be this guy. It isn't a bad poem it is just filled by a bad man. However everything you point out here is correct, bad men do give the good guys a bad reputation and a hard way to go with the Ladies.

[Jeff]

Good work on this one. I agree with GeoffS on this one.

[Dream Weaver]

I sense a bit of hostility here for the opposite gender,
let me redeem myself on their behalf. Not all men
are dirty dogs with fleas, although it might seem that
way. There are in fact a lot of good ones, they’re just
hard to find is all. I love the fact that you challenge
yourself and question why there are bad men, spitting
aside… A great angst of a write!

[Gone]

Am I foolish
Or am I brave
to dare to comment
on such a rave!

I am glad you see the difference. Sadly the good men are often too nice and not dangerous enough to be attractive.

[cfix]

LOL This is totally amazing, I loved your last two stanza's
This is wonderful and truthful really. Well done!