My little world- The Invader

I returned to my little world

to see my Fallomine

he was resting 

which was unlike him...

"What's up Fallo?" I asked concerned

he grumbled and turned away from me

I sensed jealously

his sulking gave it away...

I guess I was expecting this

because in my real world

I grew close to someone

A man name David...

"Fallomine, there is no need to be jealous," I Joked. 

He raised his head and shook from left to right

snorted towards the distance

and there... was a castle that stood high...

The wind blew strongly

taking my breath by surprise

I don't remember imagining a castle

not one big as that...

I turned to look back at Fallomine

who frowned and snorted again

he wasn't jealous

he was being aware

and cautious...

"I'm sorry Fallo but that is nothing to do with me,"

Fallomine whimpered and nudged his head under my arm

"It's OK" I soothed and rubbed along his snout

He was afraid, I was afraid

But I wanted to find out...

where this castle came from?

How did it come to be in my little world?

My eyes grew wider,

staring hard into the distance

could it be, that we have an invader?..

 

Author's Note

OK it might not be as good as the first poem, but for some reason I wanted to make a little story... let me know what you think!

Happy writing! x

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely..!!!

[SpokenWord]

Invaders in your own very little world. Well you get to kick some butt if they aren't friendly than you can take their castle!! :) I wont say if this one is as good as the first or not, :) Why compare them? It is interesting and suggest there is more to come.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love it, I hope To read more about your world and Fallomine!