My little World...

Thats a really nice fantasy poem. Something which kids would love and even 'big' kids like me would.. Your dragon is cute and as you mention is inspired by our imaginative film scripts which have portrayed "creatures' in a sweet and humane way. Your affection is genuine. This one's a must for kids..really..

Posted 13 Years Ago

Where's St. George when you want him! lol... just kidding! It's good to get lost in fantasy, far better than the real world... and your 'little world' is worth entering.
One thing about dragons... you'll never need to buy matches! (sorry about that!)
*bird*

Posted 13 Years Ago

I'm not qualified to critique poetry, and it's probably the only thing I have no idea how to feedback properly, so this review won't be worth much. I'll leave much better comments on your stories.

This was cute! I love the surprise castle at the end and the last line was great. An invader. Ohhh. lol. Moving onto the next one for sure.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Amazing..!!! Like this fantasy..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

That’s the one thing that separates us from other living creatures, imagination. And here you have a great one. Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Thats a really nice fantasy poem. Something which kids would love and even 'big' kids like me would.. Your dragon is cute and as you mention is inspired by our imaginative film scripts which have portrayed "creatures' in a sweet and humane way. Your affection is genuine. This one's a must for kids..really..

Posted 13 Years Ago

I have not seen the movie but you made me want to. I like the way your poem flowed and the way you rhymed simply

Posted 13 Years Ago

That was a good movie and obviously even better inspiration for you. How do I start this review? I feel this is your best and strongest poem that I have read from you. When I was reading it I was swept up into this new world and this mystical dragon. How you described him, playfully and wonderfully. This poem flowed each line to the next telling this story and it was totally enjoyable. You hit your stride in this poem and I read it as if music was playing behind it. Now, how to end this review well with only one word. "Bravo"

Posted 13 Years Ago

This was Great! I felt like I was there on fallomine's back flying through the clouds!

Posted 13 Years Ago