I'm alone

When I'm alone, I think of you

when i''m alone, I dream of you

Watching the light turn to night from my window

my heart gives out.

sitting with my pillow, as i lost a battle when we had that awful fight.

with you or with out you

I'm hurting inside,

love is digging me a hole and damaging me pride.

I'm alone

When i need you...

 

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

How do I comment on this, it is sad and I know it is true. I don't know if love is digging the hole as much as the lack of love is. Love shouldn't damage instead it should heal and I have to wonder is this love at all or the absence of love and longing for it. Your love poems are truly thought provoking :) very good work.