Nomad

for christ's sake...
i hear abt the chaos everyday in the world...
losing all perspiration...
losing faith in all...
just living d way we all...

supernovas collapses...
lumens protunds towards d retinas...
falling or shooting whateva... we wish...
life's not fairy tale?... or is it...
atleast as long as faith persists...

from all of all, story continues...
we calculate our action n redeem what shouldn't had done...
from all the roads, we select one...
choices can be tricky and helpless...
and we think...

everyone's not bz to evaluate...
sun always rises from east but east also changes with solstice...
we walk alone warmed by the foot prints...
keeping us alive for what nothing is to lose...
'its worth a fall' i forgot who told me...

as i turn volumes to max and start crooning...
co-passengers might say me hysteric...
but when i feel lyk i ve lived beyond eternity...
and d chapters in ma lyf comes n goes begging...
i m nothing more than a... complacent nomad... 

and one day... we all realise... we all are...

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you turn the world people toward the mirror to seek out their individual image with this electric poetic detailing mass humanity on its rise~journey~fall~to rise indomitable again and repeat the sequence endlessly~ body nomads~ spiritual nomads~ captivating~

[TeenRomance2]

I little hard to read, but I enjoyed the topic. =^-^=

[Ian Faraway]

A few grammar errors, nothing big. I loved the poem, the world's in chaos and do we know who to trust, or blame? We don't even know what we had faith in, for crying out loud! Loved it!

[TTBoy28]

I really like the language you use in this piece - also the actual visual write. The word "Nomad" you used is so befitting for the madness you deliver for the reader. I first thought about "Gypsy" but, then I said, "No, he is mad!" Keep 'em comin'! And, life is how we see it. If we place ourselves in certain predicaments, it is our own beliefs that will either keep us there or take us out of them. Thought-provoking!

[ungeomni]

The poem is the conciseness of the life we all live...