Without

Without

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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Some contradictions. Inspired by the doors song "riders on the storm"

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a dog without a bone,

 an actor on a loan,

 riders on the storm.

 

 a bird without is wings,

 collector with no things,

 riders on the storm.

 

 a car that dont got wheels,

 a junkie with no thrills,

 riders on the storm.

 

 a lover with no gal,

a friend without a pal,

 riders on the storm

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Inspired by my random thoughts and a very good song "Riders on the Storm" by The Doors. It's not done yet. 1 how'd ya like it? 2 suggestions?

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Interesting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks
Forever Hidden

12 Years Ago

^-.-^
Cool idea...This is how we do it:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Yeah man. Thanks
The Analog Kid

12 Years Ago

YW
I like the contradictions in this, makes it very interesting :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


An unusual piece of dramatic writing. I like it.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully written, unique as always :) Loved it!!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


good job ...its quite different ....keep writing

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks. I will!
A without a bone reminds me of Pink Floyd, mostly Roger Waters singing: "And when I'm a good dog they sometimes throw a bone in." and your first line reminds me of that Pink Floyd song: "Nobody Home, "and ought to have Pink Floyd on that music list! Nonetheless, this is great.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Pink Floyd's Awesome. But the first sentence was taken right out of the doors song. Thanks for the r.. read more
There's a killer on the road, his brain is squirming like a toad. I love this song and I can't wait to see what you do with it when you've completed it.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

If you give this man a ride, sweet family will die. Killer on the road. Yeaaaaaaah! I love the song .. read more
It's good, but you might want to capitalize some of it. Unless you like it the way it is.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Holy fiddlebiscuts this thing works. And Oh! I can't caps it. On a phone. Sites weird.
Wow. PM me with your every intention for this. You got better overnight! It goes SOOOOOO many ways, filled with profundities I'm not capable of ever grasping in a way. Even if you didn't mean all the possible interpretations, your take would certainly be interesting. The title is AMAZING. It's at the core of every symbol. WOW

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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