Me

2 colors that describe me

sometimes i am rock and roll red.

 other times i am midnight purple.

 loud, proud, and to the point camaro.

 to quiet, sly, and observant bmw.

 rock of ages to purple rain.

the stroke to the unforgiven.

 fun and laughs,

 buissness and work.

 i hang with friends.

 i like cars and sports.

 i play games and joke.  

 then.    

 i am silent and listening.

 doing the right thing.

 i work and do as told.

 there is a time for work and a time for play.

 its better to burn out,

 than to fade away.

 but it seems i do both.

Author's Note

A school project. We choose two colors that described us and wrote a poem. I've changed some since then but this is mostly still true. I might write another later. I'm on a phone and can't press enter plus a few other buttons so it isn't supposed to look like that but I can't do anything about it.

Reviews

[Miranda Richard]

Hi!

[CHRIS ANDES]

..good thing you can relate to your self
=]

[Aehr]

this is very well written. I love the description of the colors and the two cars. I enjoyed this. The project must have been interesting. I love it!

[Renée]

lol ! What a fun project ! Colors, Cars..so many things that describe you..I bet you could fine even more now! It is always endless... I recognized so many songs..Billy Squire, Prince, Def Leppard..

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks! I'm surprised someone got all that. Also Metallica is in there too. :)

[Renée]

Oh I do love music of all kinds and music can be your voice when people tape your mouth shut..agree ? ( ;

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. Exactly!

[Owlgirl]

Nicely worded, great job, awesome use of colors!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks!

[Laura Maidah]

business typo. it's misspelled in the second to last line. Otherwise, this is a pretty stellar achievement. Is it inspired by The Doors? Just curious. Kill a cat, dude.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

This is all over the place and I like it. Nice job.

[Miranda Richard]

Nice. It really speaks, I can relate. Though I were to choose two colors about me, it's be a calm blue. And gray, mysterious.

[afra]

awesome ..i love it ...the last part was my favorite....good job keep it up

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

great poem very good haha