Darville and Balboa

what do bo darville and rocky balboa have in common?

 a powerfull 455 resignating under a hood.

 complex honeycomb rims,

 a signature of the beast.

 4 malevolent high grip uniroyal tires,

eating pavement like its nothing.

 a majestic phoenix crying out to a shaker scoop.

 what do bo darville and rocky balboa have in common?

 they both proudly drive a pontiac trans-am

Author's Note

My favorite kind of car. I thought it kinda deserved something special. Rocky Balboa and Bo Darville (the bandit) both had one. I'm getting one soon! Special thanks to The Wilted Rose for helping out with this. Thanks for the idea that got it going. Thumb up to you! (Also I think it needs more.: / any suggestions?)

Reviews

[Watch Me Scream]

I find it amazing how I had no idea what the hell this car was until I read the poem, and now I want it... haha that's a talent. You're descriptive, and good at tainting your words to paint an image. Very persuasive. Nice.

[Melody]

It was very different. It's good and interesting. Good write, Harley. :) It was Krinkly!

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

i like this it was different and that is one reason i like it and haha i think every one in the world knows that is your favorite car lolz jkay but anyways love this :)

[writingurl14]

nice poem :)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Definatley more descriptions. Maybe find out more about them and add more. All in all, I thought this was pretty cool!

[That_Girl]

lol I liked this!! :)

[Lindsay T]

Nice descriptions, sounds like a good car haha :) I liked the line "a signature of the beast".

[mariah]

:) you seem to like cars alot (i already new that though) and it shows through this. as i read it, i can feel the happiness you got out of writing this. nice job! :P
-Mariah

[therin]

Made me smile. Not at all what I was expecting. My eyes had troubles with the lack of capitals, but it seems to suit. Congratulations on the new car! You clearly love it, a person who wants to write poetry about their car, must surely be ooper excited to be getting one.

I love that you've focused exclusively on the cars, rather than trying to force your love into some double-meaning evaluation of their spirit as well.

thank you - your pride and joy shines through.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks! Their my favorite type of car and I was stoked when my older brought said he was getting me one. Also Thanks for the review. I wish I could capitalize but the mobile site is weird