Darville and Balboa

Darville and Balboa

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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What do Bo Darville and Rocky Balboa have in common?

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what do bo darville and rocky balboa have in common?

 a powerfull 455 resignating under a hood.

 complex honeycomb rims,

 a signature of the beast.

 4 malevolent high grip uniroyal tires,

eating pavement like its nothing.

 a majestic phoenix crying out to a shaker scoop.

 what do bo darville and rocky balboa have in common?

 they both proudly drive a pontiac trans-am

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
My favorite kind of car. I thought it kinda deserved something special. Rocky Balboa and Bo Darville (the bandit) both had one. I'm getting one soon! Special thanks to The Wilted Rose for helping out with this. Thanks for the idea that got it going. Thumb up to you! (Also I think it needs more.: / any suggestions?)

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um, have motre details on wht sounds the car make when u start the ignition and its color. srry i don't really know. :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great job! Nicely worded, and lol.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your fasination with cars never ceases to amaze me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the last line the best, it was very fun to read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I didn't know that it was about a car till i read the half of the poem and Author's Note, lol.
This was very fun to read, and it's also very descriptive and inspiring.
Both characters are awesome, i like your idea!
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up fethered monkey bear! xD



Posted 12 Years Ago


I regret to say that I don't know any of these two characters. Still, I find this piece a nice one. I better read something about these two persons.

If you really want to get your message across the readers, try writing about something that is common to all. (=

I appreciate this poem. Obviously, your a fan of both characters. (=

Posted 12 Years Ago


pretty good bro. definitely made the car sound like a raging bad a*s. well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


very different, but a good different.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nothin memorable, but that's not what you were going for, I'd wager.

Posted 12 Years Ago


haha, i love this car too! I'm so jealous that you're getting one! as far as the poem goes it's good! you obviously love the car if you know as much about it and about those characters as you do!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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