Wait

My love. Just wait for me

you said you love me and i love you,

 youre my savior and i hope im still youres too,

 it will work we have to push through,

 even though the worlds against me and you.  

 if you fight with me we can do it all,

 ill catch you when you fall,

 please hear my call,

come and together we will stand tall.  

 if you wait i can go the distance,

 it will be in 3 years for instance.  

 but if we hold strong,

 ill be coming before too long.

 we cant be together right now,

 but i will find out how.  

seperated by land at least not see,

 and we can talk through technology.    

 one day my girl,

 ill give you the world.  

well be on our own someday so dont haste,

 when were independent ill look for youre place.      

when no one can tell us its right or wrong,

 where we can sing our own love song.    

 where its our decision not our elders,

 when we choose not to listen to others.  

 thats the day,

 waiting is the price to pay.    

 ill pay it if you will,

 after all its both our bill.                              

 S

Author's Note

I'm on a phone it doesn't look good who cares really its the message that counts and it only counts if it gets to the intended reciever. Rate review I guess.

Reviews

[mariah]

i really love the rythem in this! its also very sweet :) great job, the best writting comes naturally, not forced, and this obviously came to you.
-mariah.

[Dearantlers]

Ahh, so I take it the girl you like is far away. Why will it be 3 years though?
As usual, your rhyming, which I think is the coolest thing! I've never been able to get a poem that makes sense that rhymes. I keep mentioning it, but thats because I think that it's one of the hardest things to master, and that you can do it is amazing! And, as usual, your poem is purely amazing! You said that you really don't write that much, but you've got some skills that I really think you should put to some more use. Enter some contests, and win some prizes!

[.Lost Soul.]

Breathtaking. Wonderful. Nice message. Great write! :)
100/100

[Jeanette]

I hope your 3 years passes smoothly and quickly. And I hope you hold onto these feelings, as does she.

I hope for YOU...
=)

[RachelReaper]

I really loved this poem, many people can relate to it.

[Mackenzie Brooke]

Wow th swas really great! I can read your emotions perfectly and it's so lovely and sentimental.

[Laura S.]

Wow, this is breathtaking. I can really relate to this to this! Very deep, emotional, and promising love. Reminds me of what one has to undergo while living throughout a long distance relationship. Love it. Cheers!