Wait

My love. Just wait for me

you said you love me and i love you,

 youre my savior and i hope im still youres too,

 it will work we have to push through,

 even though the worlds against me and you.  

 if you fight with me we can do it all,

 ill catch you when you fall,

 please hear my call,

come and together we will stand tall.  

 if you wait i can go the distance,

 it will be in 3 years for instance.  

 but if we hold strong,

 ill be coming before too long.

 we cant be together right now,

 but i will find out how.  

seperated by land at least not see,

 and we can talk through technology.    

 one day my girl,

 ill give you the world.  

well be on our own someday so dont haste,

 when were independent ill look for youre place.      

when no one can tell us its right or wrong,

 where we can sing our own love song.    

 where its our decision not our elders,

 when we choose not to listen to others.  

 thats the day,

 waiting is the price to pay.    

 ill pay it if you will,

 after all its both our bill.                              

 S

Author's Note

I'm on a phone it doesn't look good who cares really its the message that counts and it only counts if it gets to the intended reciever. Rate review I guess.

Reviews

[Mariah Corey]

That is so sweet. I luv how u would risk everything u must really luv this person. I didn't believ tht there was such a love that exists in this world. Your writing is seriously inspirational. I mean your feelings r so deep and they r so vivid. I hope you write more about love or maybe do one with love and then despair or anger. Good job. :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

Despair and anger? Read "no sympathy" I think it fits that bill. Thanks for the review

[Mariah Corey]

np

[Mariah Corey]

ok i will read tht

[Miranda Richard]

How nice, you wrote a great poem :)

[Aehr]

this is so sweet.. just made me go 'aww...' i loved it... lovely message. whoever this is dedicated to, is a very lucky gal... keep writing!

[Harley (arbiter)]

well she was i guess but anyway thanks i apreciate the review and all the others also. thanks

[Aehr]

welcome

[Aurora .I.]

I love this piece! It's just so cute and awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! X3 Looking forward to your next piece! Thank you for sharing your art with the world!

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

i totally love this!!!!!

[natzky]

wow...this poem of yours is really sweet...
never mind the way it looks, the emotions are there..really cute..;)

[afra]

very deep and emotional ...=(

[Laura Maidah]

I know it was on a phone. It looks nice. The format looks intentional, btw. LOL. I read it again.

[Laura Maidah]

"yours" does not have an "e" in it in the first line. This is wonderful Harley, really. It's a story just waiting to happen.