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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Grim reaper's feelings

Grim reaper's feelings

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
"

Because we all have feelings right?

"

Why do people fear me?  

  For it is not I who brings the end of lives. 

 I am only a messenger and the only messenger I am.  

 A taxi to the other sides.

  I did not ask for this job.  

 People say I did but those are lies.

  But I have accepted that I am the one there

  When someone dies.

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
I just thought.... What would it be like to be death. People come on. I want to know what you thought about it. At least say something

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This is a brilliant poem, and it brings up a really good point. A whole nother side to something that we have thought of as bad or evil for our entire lives. This flow worked really well, and I really like how straight-to-the-point it was. The meaning was clear, and you got it across in very few words. Good for you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Why thank you. I'm honored for the review. *Jedi bow*



Reviews

This is an interesting twist on the reaper himself. You have made him into someone who is just doing their job and actually not the one who is murdering you. I really liked this :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! That's amazing! Very well written and great word choices, you may want to play around a little with formatting, but the flow is already great. I love how you seem to become in the mindset of death, lovely work.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


creepy but really good i didnt know you could write nice harley :)


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Posted 12 Years Ago


i really liked the third line the mirror wordplay worked really well.

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 4, 2012
Last Updated on July 2, 2012
Tags: grim, reaper, death, feelings, why, acceptance

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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

the age of classic rock , AR



About
I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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