This is a brilliant poem, and it brings up a really good point. A whole nother side to something that we have thought of as bad or evil for our entire lives. This flow worked really well, and I really like how straight-to-the-point it was. The meaning was clear, and you got it across in very few words. Good for you.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Why thank you. I'm honored for the review. *Jedi bow*
This is a brilliant poem, and it brings up a really good point. A whole nother side to something that we have thought of as bad or evil for our entire lives. This flow worked really well, and I really like how straight-to-the-point it was. The meaning was clear, and you got it across in very few words. Good for you.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Why thank you. I'm honored for the review. *Jedi bow*
I love the darkness in it. Rarely do you come across a piece of writing like this.
I'm a devoted fan of yours, yes, but I'd like to see you do better. Push your limits, Harley.
What can you do that you're not showing, hmm?
M
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Challenge accepted! When I defeat writers block. >:(
12 Years Ago
Hahaha alrighty
I do not fear, you, I even feel you...
Nice poem. Frequences need to be shared.
Watch the movie: " The perfect Host" did you saw it already? you shall adore it. Nothing is what it .. read moreWatch the movie: " The perfect Host" did you saw it already? you shall adore it. Nothing is what it seems... more I can't say :) keep on penning.
Nice poem I like the ominus feeling of it, but at the same time you kinda have to feel bad for the guy. I mean imagine if your job was to collect souls
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Exactly! Most people think he's evil and etc. That's what I'm trying to say in this though. He's not.. read moreExactly! Most people think he's evil and etc. That's what I'm trying to say in this though. He's not.
Nice poem,,,
I think you should change the title to "GRIM REAPER'S FEELINGS".
You forgot to put an apostrophe.
Anyway, the message of the poem is very clear. (=
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thanks for pointing that out. And Thanks for the review!
Wow. I find it very interesting you wrote from his perspective but I love the spin you took on it. And in reality, it's probably quite true. Death just comes at the end. He doesn't get you there. - A taxi to the other sides.
I wasn't sure what you meant by that sentence though. Most people say, "I'll meet you on the other side." So when you say, 'sides,' do you just mean that there are many for different people? I mean, it's a poem so it could be cryptic and what not but I think it might be better to read if you wrote sides.
Anyway, I'm just being nit picky, thanks for a great poem. I loved the last bit: I have have accepted that I am the one there when someone dies.
It's very cool to think of that because you have death by your side, when no-one else is. Thanks for a great poem again, keep it up :)
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12 Years Ago
Thanks. And about "the other sides" welp I put that there meaning heaven and hell. Others have actua.. read moreThanks. And about "the other sides" welp I put that there meaning heaven and hell. Others have actually asked about that before. :)
12 Years Ago
Ah. Yeah, I was like, he probably actually means that. Well, it was great anyway :)
Oh, so neat! I've never thought about writing anything from the reaper's perspective. I really like what you did here. I especially liked the line about being a taxi to the other sides. The last two lines are gripping and definitely fitting. Very well done :)
I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..