Grim reaper's feelings

Grim reaper's feelings

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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Because we all have feelings right?

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Why do people fear me?  

  For it is not I who brings the end of lives. 

 I am only a messenger and the only messenger I am.  

 A taxi to the other sides.

  I did not ask for this job.  

 People say I did but those are lies.

  But I have accepted that I am the one there

  When someone dies.

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
I just thought.... What would it be like to be death. People come on. I want to know what you thought about it. At least say something

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This is a brilliant poem, and it brings up a really good point. A whole nother side to something that we have thought of as bad or evil for our entire lives. This flow worked really well, and I really like how straight-to-the-point it was. The meaning was clear, and you got it across in very few words. Good for you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Why thank you. I'm honored for the review. *Jedi bow*



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Hello Harley! I really loved the original thought behind your poem. You did a fanstatic job with this. You have a really good imagination, let it keep flowing from you. Top marks!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^
Helen Crutchett

12 Years Ago

You are most welcome, anytime.
Everyone focuses on the person who dies and never death him (or her) self. I like this point of view, very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice Piece! I never have tried to put this into perspective. Keep up the good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks
Reminds me of The Book Thief by Marcus Zusak where the narrator Is death. Interesting point of view, I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Never heard of it but I guess I should check it out thanks for the review ^_^
Something I have actually thought about once before. What if he isn't here,there, by choice. Really great write:D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
aaaww.. this is somehow a revelation. the grim reaper has been branded with death. however, as you said, he is only the messenger, not the bearer. great poem! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you, in a way that's my goal. To get people to reaslise the softer side to the reaper. Lol
Gothic Girl

12 Years Ago

you did a great job in doing that. truly a success. :)
I loved it. It sort of got me thinking about death's side. Great poem. There's not much i can critque because i love it the way it is. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
Jacques

12 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
Grim reaper had a bad reputation. Best book on the Grim Reaper was the Incarnations of immortality series by Pier Anthony. Gave reason and purpose for death. The book is called "On a pale horse." I like your description. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :)
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I always thought that! Poor Grim Reaper! LOOOOOVE IT!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Really!? Awesome! I thought I was the only one :D
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12 Years Ago

You're awesome too! :D I love your poem.
death. I've seen lots of it and you never get completely used to it. It ceases to shock you after awhile, unless of course it's one of your own. THat you never get used to. "a taxi to the other sides" like crossing the river stix. Nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on June 4, 2012
Last Updated on July 2, 2012
Tags: grim, reaper, death, feelings, why, acceptance

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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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