purple rain

purple rain

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)

purple rain.

 but rain the same.

 i think that i have gone insane.

 but its a beutiful sight.

 i wish i may i wish i might.

 see you in the rain tonight.

 i never meant to cause you any sorrow.

 i never meant to cause you any pain.

 i only wanted  to see you and me together in the rain.

 purple rain

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Inspired by Prince "Purple Rain"

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As red and blue merge...
Raindrops of the universe
Shall amalgamate.

I hear a song....

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the pace of it and its very beautiful! Goes at a steady beat. The title seems familiar.... lol. A very well written piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like your rain... It's soulful. I also peeked at your "Purple Hue", and very much enjoyed that as well. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, nice flow and well written. I love how you ended and started with "Purple Rain", the repition pulls it all together. You may want to play around with punctuation, but overall this is great!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 4, 2012
Last Updated on June 11, 2012
Tags: purple, rain, prince, love, insane, beutiful

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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

the age of classic rock , AR



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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