School

Its killing me

School is killing me
So much homework
I don't have time to write
That's why I'm not on WC
I'm going berserk
Up till midnight

My brain
Its throbing in my skull
In pain
I'm growing dull

First poem from me in months
I've been nooked full
I can hardly find rhymes
But I have to go to school

My poet brain is melting
Taking other parts down too
I can hardly remember my trucks timing
Is the gear ratio three point two?
My grades used to be shining
Now their slipping too

I would be reviewing and writing
And chatting with all my friends
Instead I'm thinking and calculating
And trying to find time to fix loose ends

I have new parts for my truck
Ideas in my head
But because of homework
I'd rather be dead

Author's Note

I wouldn't really rther be dead its just that I'm in all honors classes and have rotc and a lot of stuff to do at home and I'm super busy. That's why I haven't been on in ages. When I do get back on track I'm catching up with all my friends so y'all message me!!

Reviews

[Lonely Islander]

'slams school and other work with a frying pan' DAMN U STUPID STUFF!
Hehe lol...a great poem. I really did enjoy reading it:-):-):-D.

[Jamie Cook]

Wow, you have a lot on your plate :l Well, I wish you the best in everything!!! :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

apart from the distubing last line ( an I'm certainly hoping and grateful that you are actually staying alive) this is a very well written piece from you and well, if it is of any comfort or consolation, writer's block happens to nay poet at the best of times, so please please don't be so hard on yourself, you have a long life with many new experiences ahead of you, a life long voyage as a poet...all the best

[marie]

i am so sorry about your business, have to say i can relate, most of the time when i'm on its while i'm in the car... not much time otherwise

[Laura Maidah]

This is so cute. That's about all I can think right now. Last line is adorable.

[Aehr]

Oh, that's why we haven't seen you in ages! haha.
I really know the feeling. Trust me. Uhh, it makes me want to break/destroy everything in my way. I... end up crying sometimes.... But whatever..
The description is pretty amazing. And you conveyed your feelings well here.
:)

[lee von cleef]

Big round tail lights, squalling through the night,Bubble gum machine getting smaller in the rear view, Hot damns and the county line too. Three weeks on a beach you'll be alright.Guess you know I like the car.

[J. F. Charleston]

I know what it feels like. I was off for some months at a time last year because I didn't have time then I got things back together and got back on. It's ok man, you'll make it through. I really liked how you talked about the problem, and how you shared it. Good luck.

[gombeggar]

good that yer writing yer feelings out...always good practice...we all get in ruts or get too hung up by ral life too write sometimes...it happens...keep a notepad with u and jaut things down as they come to u...u can use them later when u have more time

[Tabitha t]

just wait till you have a job! think its bad now? lol