Prolouge
A Chapter by Harley (arbiter)
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December 12, 2025
Little Rock, Arkansas
Detective Miller is meeting with an "ex"-street racer. He knows he is still racing, but part of the agreement was that said racer walks after all questions have been asked. The guy's name is Flynt. He, he was a legiond. Champion for 7 whole years and most wanted in the city.
"F****r's not gonna show" Millers radio beeped.
"Just stay out of the way. Everyone rememberes the deal." Miller said back, talking to his superior, Officer Daniels.
Little did they know, Flynt was listening on with his own CB, just across the street.
"Guess I better go." Flynt said to his wingman in the passenger seat. His 1970 Dart a solid black 2 door. "Take her to the meetup, just as I said and be back in the Camaro, 3 hours"
"I know man, I know"
Flynt sighed "Here I go." He strolled across the street and into the coffie shop. His wingman drove off soon after.
© 2013 Harley (arbiter)
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interesting start Harley.... not bad.... i don't know if you didn't put a lot of details on purpose, but there isn't much of it. it wouldn't be bad to add in a little extra detail here and there. other than that, its an okay start. cant wait for more. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I didn't put much in cuz I aint got much xD thanks
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11 Years Ago
XD ah.... XD
welcome :D
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11 Years Ago
so what could I put in? As a filler and stuff
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11 Years Ago
Like what? :D
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11 Years Ago
like description of character, what characters think about other characters, whats going on around t.. read morelike description of character, what characters think about other characters, whats going on around them, setting, um... other stuff! XD
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11 Years Ago
Well...... ok when I'm reading a book and there's a character desrciption I ignore it and use their .. read moreWell...... ok when I'm reading a book and there's a character desrciption I ignore it and use their attitude and stuff to visialise them in my head. So I kinda want people reading this to do that, get it? Ok I'll add some other stuff. Gotcha
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11 Years Ago
okay then? I use all of it, description, actions, feelings, thoughts, when i write, so that a charac.. read moreokay then? I use all of it, description, actions, feelings, thoughts, when i write, so that a character is visualized, but that works i guess. whatever works.
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11 Years Ago
But that's why you and everyone else love me xD
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11 Years Ago
mmhmm... that's totally the reason. *twiddles thumbs, and tries to whistle, but can't*
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11 Years Ago
(I can't wistle either) that and the fact I'm so sexy ;) xD
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(ikr? its like how the hell do you do that?) uh huh... *looks away*
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11 Years Ago
(I've tried. Never can. Or snap.) Why are you so mean *bursts out crying* waaaaaah D'x
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(I have tried. and i can snap. :P) because, I'm me. >:P
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(F**k you) D'x
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(you wish) XD
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(You do too) :'(
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*gives you matchbox cars to play with* XD
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oooh.... ahhhh.... Fiiiiiirrrreeeee.... :D
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11 Years Ago
*I just sit there, and watch it burn, not even moving*
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*i poke you, wondering if you are dead*
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ahh! *i scream* It lives! XD
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i dunno. :P *laughs and pokes you again*
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11 Years Ago
Please stop.... or I'll burn you *tilts head to the side and flicks on the lighter*
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11 Years Ago
dafuq? sounds like you came out of some fucked up Horror Movie... O.o
and you wouldn't burn m.. read more dafuq? sounds like you came out of some fucked up Horror Movie... O.o
and you wouldn't burn me! :D im too extra awesome super duper special! ^_^
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11 Years Ago
Ya know, burning you could be your punishment
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11 Years Ago
i've already got burns. that wouldn't do anything to me that hasn't already been done. try something.. read morei've already got burns. that wouldn't do anything to me that hasn't already been done. try something more original, will ya?
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11 Years Ago
But do you have burns in certain spots? XD
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... O.o why do you wanna know?
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11 Years Ago
*facepalm* never mind
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11 Years Ago
*hugs you, but stays away from the lighter.*
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11 Years Ago
why are you so sad? be happy! :J
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11 Years Ago
because, you don't deserve to be unhappy.
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11 Years Ago
You don't either
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11 Years Ago
well that sucks for me, but you should be happy and peppy and smiley. :/ not sad and down...
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11 Years Ago
You should too
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11 Years Ago
well, right now im happy. so you should be too! :D please? :/
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11 Years Ago
You're happy? :) that's good
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11 Years Ago
yeah, but you aren't! DX
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I am happy. You're happy, that makes me happy
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you better not be lying to me... -_- I will hug you and not let go! grrr!!!! XD :P
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Id like that
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i know! :D and that would make you happy.. right? :J
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Added on January 2, 2013
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Harley (arbiter)the age of classic rock , AR
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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..
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