I'm Sorry

For all the things I've put you through

this is about more than what it says.

Author's Note

You say that it hurts when I say I love you
I'm sorry for all of the shit I've put you through

I hope we can work it out all in the end
So both of our broken hearts together they will mend

You say all of the bad things I could do
I say there's stuff you could hurt me with too

I put in my trust I put in all my hope
I hate it when all you do is be down and mope

Why won't you let me help you and then
We could just fall over in love again

You're going through a hard time I know
I promise you I'll never let go

I was ripped away and I came back
I'm searching for that one I lack

I think you know that thing is you
And I'm so sorry about what you've been through

Let me help please babe come out of your shell
You're putting yourself in so much hell

And you think that's how you want your life
But you'll realise its wrong to live in strife

Let me help you out of depression
I try to talk but you're not in session

Why don't you let me help you and then

We can fall in love over again

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

The length, scale and content of this piece really demonstrates your talent, nice work.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you :D

[PP]

Harley this is beautiful! You've got such a great understanding of feelings, emotions and love. I hope she allows you to help :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it :)

[FrancescaX]

That is sweet...and not the disgusting kind. Hope the girl realises that she has just stumbled on worlds rarest guy.
lovely poem and im sorry that your sorry...she shouldn't leave you like that.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you for the kind words. And her parents forced her to break up with me

[FrancescaX]

Why? Too young or what?

[Harley (arbiter)]

They don't like long distant relationships

[FrancescaX]

Where did you stay and where was she? Actually how did you guys meet if this relationship was bound to be long distance?

[Harley (arbiter)]

its a long story

[FrancescaX]

Yep...this review cant get any longer😊

[Lost in Wonderland]

This was beautiful and sad. I can tell that you really want to help this girl and I hope you guys can work it out!
God bless

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you