Hey Guys I Need an Opinion

Please?

hey guys and gals xD i need an opinion! i need to know what my best 2 or 3 pieces of work are. my school does a thing where we submit a few poems/shortstories and they try and get them published. soooo im asking what my best 2 or 3 pieces are.

Author's Note

Thanks :)
Ok guys! I've choosen "FoolsL as one of them. So I just need one or two more :) thanks for all the help guys

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

I'll take a look. I understand that this is hard to do, your writing is like your babies, and is it ever easy to decide which is your favorite? I have to have a ten-page writing sample to send to a creative writing camp, so I'll tell ya what. You do it for me, and I'll do it for you. Deal?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ok

[Calibaster]

I'll take a look.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you :)

[PP]

The Seven Sins!!! Top one that is.

[Harley (arbiter)]

?

[Harley (arbiter)]

I don't think I have a poem called the seven sins....

[PP]

Oooooops I am sorry for some reason I thought this was posted by Roshan, obviously it popped up on my home screen since he has commented on this one. I am extremely sorry!! But I promise I'll read through your writings and suggest you which one I think is the best :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh xD that's alright. And like I said, no-one has too

[Faffy]

HAHAHA XD

[PP]

hahahaha..Roshan its all your fault!! Harley I am so sorry and I owe you many reviews I promise :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its ok but if you insist xD ill check your stuff out aswell

[Faffy]

hahaha

[PP]

Brilliant Harley, I will look forward to it x !!! Roshan........(legend) next time I won't jump into comments unless I actually know who has written it!! lols

[Faffy]

haha im still laughing!

[PP]

Stop hahaha-ing you!

[Faffy]

ok =) speaking of review i owe both of you quite a few!

[PP]

Common then, get working !! lol, Well thanks for introducing me to lovely Harley btw hahah

[Faffy]

haha wait did i introduce you?

[PP]

hahaha unofficially yes !

[Faffy]

bro, for real? you want me to pick out your best work? thats like asking someone to choose between meeting the master chief or the arbiter but ill have a look see =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Woah... that's a hard choice....... f**k dude a human hero legend or an alien badass motherf**er..... crap.... I don't know witch on id pick
Thanks man xD

[Faffy]

haha id just play halo 2 again =P

[Harley (arbiter)]

I should. Halo 2 is the bomb

[Faffy]

may its online servers rest in peace =(

[Harley (arbiter)]

Wait what? (I haven't had xbl in like 2 years) they stopped halo 2's online???

[Faffy]

um yea.... dont worry i cried too =P

[Faffy]

they shut down line 4 years ago tho

[Faffy]

like*

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well that kinda explains it. I haven't had a halo 2 since I was about 8. I just got one a few months ago. That kinda sucks. And I don't now if they shouold remake halo 2 because ce anniversary didn't live up to all the expectations :/

[Faffy]

yea 343 should remake it thats would be awesome

[Harley (arbiter)]

They should do better than they did with cea and id love it.

[Felicity's Eve]

Of course. I haven't read all of your stuff yet so I'll be sure to do that asap. Do I have a deadline?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well not really. XD and you don't have to do it. I just want to get two or three in that book thing. Its early febuary when the entries are due xD I just wanted to get a head start

[Felicity's Eve]

Ok makes since.
I'm that kind of person too. XD

[Britt]

ill deff be sure to take a look when i get home later! :]

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you :)

[Britt]

Staring at my phone, was my favorite one I saw. :P