Hey Guys I Need an Opinion

Please?

hey guys and gals xD i need an opinion! i need to know what my best 2 or 3 pieces of work are. my school does a thing where we submit a few poems/shortstories and they try and get them published. soooo im asking what my best 2 or 3 pieces are.

Author's Note

Thanks :)
Ok guys! I've choosen "FoolsL as one of them. So I just need one or two more :) thanks for all the help guys

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

I'll take a look. I understand that this is hard to do, your writing is like your babies, and is it ever easy to decide which is your favorite? I have to have a ten-page writing sample to send to a creative writing camp, so I'll tell ya what. You do it for me, and I'll do it for you. Deal?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ok

[Danielle]

I will take a look just hope my opinion is not to late....much good luck to you!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Not yet. Thanks :)

[Owlgirl]

I personally like "Grim Reaper's Feelings" best of all :)
Goodluck at getting published!!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Aehr]

I love your poems 'Fall', 'Grim reaper's feelings', and 'Jacob'. You write brilliantly of course, but these three are my all time favourites by you :)

[captain]

i don't know exactly but choose with your heart it will guide you in choosing.

[RachelReaper]

Grim Reapers feelings for sure!!! you do realize that you have to enter that one, right?

[Harley (arbiter)]

I was planning on it really. Its the first I ever wrote :D

[Abbie]

Don't Blink. its one of yours against bullying, which is a good message and it was written well.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you :3 (ill have to read that one again xD) (its been so long I've forgotten it)

[Abbie]

welcome.
XD you forgot your own writing?!?!?! XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah xD

[Abbie]

XD then again you write a lot more then i do....
but most of mine is stories or books/chapters....

[Harley (arbiter)]

I do write a lot of stuf. I've gotten two or three written just today I think

[Abbie]

I know.
I wrote two today too! plus im working on some stories and chapters too!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nice

[Harley (arbiter)]

The difference is I reviewed yours xD

[Abbie]

yeah, you'd like one of the stories. its all cute and Christmass-y, but sad.....

[Abbie]

XD hey! I read yours multiple times! and then sulked about them... and then I read it again... then sulked... then I just didnt review because i didnt know what to put............

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah. I might.
I made you sulk D: I'm sorry!!

[Abbie]

?
XD thats the one that made me sulk!

[Harley (arbiter)]

I might like it.
............ whaaa?.... wait... I'm kinda confused now

[Abbie]

ah. XD
youre poem called "I'm Sorry" thats the one that i was like "....."

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oooh.

[Abbie]

yeah.....

[Harley (arbiter)]

Sorry I made you pout :c

[Abbie]

XD its k... I'm sorry I'm all confused and hurting you

[Harley (arbiter)]

Your not hurting me. I'm sorry I got you confused :J

[Abbie]

You're not getting me confused... I'm getting me confused....

[Harley (arbiter)]

But I'm not helping am I?

[Abbie]

not really... XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

Didn't think so

[Abbie]

nope....

[Harley (arbiter)]

Sorry

[Abbie]

its k... ({})

[Harley (arbiter)]

({}) its not really

[Abbie]

nah, but theres nothing else to say...

[}Echo{]

I like "Fools" and "I'm Sorry". I think those two are definatley the best.

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks :D I've decided fools will be one because so many like it. I like I'm sorry. I put a lot into it. Again thanks :)

[}Echo{]

:D Cool. Yeah.. Welcomes. :)

[Mindfang]

I'll work right on it.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you :)

[Mindfang]

I like bully and fools

[Harley (arbiter)]

Alrighty. Thank you! I figured bully should be one because of the meaning

[Calibaster]

Yeah, those two are definitely the ones.

[Calibaster]

I like Fools and Live the best. They are pretty darn good.

[Harley (arbiter)]

I think fools is def going in. :D

[Calibaster]

Good!