Fools

Just tools

Author's Note

A monster
In a den

A general
And his men

Banging on the door
Explosions pushing it apart

As the beast lays on the floor
Waiting for the slaughter to start

The final boom
The door goes down

Men rush in their tomb
Bullets flying around

The monster jumps
And fights them all

Kills with bloddy fist pumps
Till the last one takes his fall

A bloody mess
The monster walks out

You can guess
What it did shout

Freedom at last
No longer trapped in a room

Now it is his past
He is released in a thundering boom

FOOLS
He roars

They were just tools
Used in wars

Reviews

[Danielle]

Excellent poem....love what its about, my favorite line "Fools He roars They were just tools Used in wars, nice work!

[Fréyjä Helv..]

This is probably the BEST poem I've read from you. There's probably a deeper meaning of the monster... This holds a thrill in it that sparks my interest. good write...

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[captain]

nice!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

i think there is a fierce quality to your writing, the rhyming is so clever and powerful too, well done!

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[Nicole]

i absolutely adore this!!!!!!!!!!! best ending ever :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks :D
Haven't heard from you in a while! How've you been?

[Nicole]

good, just getting really busy, with the semester wrapping up and all :P don't have as much time as i used to.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah I understand that :D

[Falling Leaf.]

....AND THIS ONE! Definitely! :D I've read the others, this one and Jacob are definitely my favorite!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Alright xD

[Falling Leaf.]

Boy I liked this one a lot. Really.

[RachelReaper]

haven't seen you in a while:) I like your poem, keep up with it

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I feel for our soldier joining for the right reasons but forced into wrong situations by greedy and power hungry leaders.

[Colleen a Bean]

I like it and I can definatley see the imagery in this

[Just Some Dreamer]

I really like the rhythm of this poem. Fast paced and furious. I like this one, definitely my kind of poem. :)