Job Assigned

Read. You might be suprised.

a song/poem kinda that just came to me. 

Author's Note

Somethings wrong inside
Look into my eyes
Tell me there's what is bothering you

We do not have the time
Just hurry step in line
Fill the space assigned to you

We all have a move
And always something to prove
But let me say something to you

And as of right now
I just don't know how
But you have my job too

Space is caught in time
There dancing to our rhyme
People am I just not coming through

Seconds keep ticking by
They continue to cry
Waste away in tears is what they'll do

Moving from this spot
But moving are you not
Running away from fears is all you do

We all have a goal
Before we slip into the hole
But now my goal its all up to you

As my time slipps away
For its my final day
You have to get out from these streets we call the zoo

Reviews

[devon]

Interesting, definitely. I'm not sure exactly sure what the meaning and reason of it is, but I did an overall sense of urgency and importance of what the narrator is saying. The rhyme scheme is nice!

:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Sorry. I could've explained it I guess :D there was a guy who had a job, a calling in life, and it was to get out of some place he, and others were being contained, but he is dieing and passes the job to someone else (if that makes any sense)

[devon]

it does! Thank you for clarifying. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you for reviewing

[devon]

You're welcome!