What I See in You

little poem i made up. like it? not my best i dont think though :/

Author's Note

What I see in you
Is what you can't see
Girl listen to me

You're beautiful
Pretty cute and sweet
I'm really glad that we got to meet

You're there
You care

Listen to me
You're beautiful you just can't see
What I see in you
And I know its true
I wish you did too

Reviews

[Calibaster]

I like this.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks :D

[dunnia]

awww this is soo cute and beautiful ........ i love your work its very honest ..... im sure any girl would love to recieve a poem like this :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[dunnia]

your welcome

[Mir]

This was really very beautifully written! I hope it'll work out for you with her! :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[devon]

Aw, this was really sweet. It has an almost innocent tone about it, and I think that's lovely. While it's not necessarily what I consider romantic, it certainly is a cute poem about your obvious affection for a very lucky girl.

Let her know how you feel!

:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it :D and I have

[devon]

You're welcome. And yay! What did your lovely lady say, might I ask? :)

[Abbie]

She returned the feelings. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Woah I forgot about this one.
Yes she did :D

[Abbie]

XD I thought u did. So I'd figure I answer her question. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you! :3

[Abbie]

Always welcome babe. E: and Harley, check ur phone for texts. XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

It says I have no new ones

[Abbie]

Your 'smart' phone is an idiot.

[Harley (arbiter)]

I realised that the first few days after I got it

[Abbie]

Good -_-

[Harley (arbiter)]

Want me to txt you?

[Abbie]

Didn't you just text me hello?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes

[Abbie]

I got it....

[Harley (arbiter)]

I'm not getting anythign

[Abbie]

Sigh.... Maybe tomorrow morning... Night! :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Goodnight

[devon]

Aw :)

[Abbie]

:$ xD

[Lost in Wonderland]

aw Harely that was so sweet:) Who ever this is for, she's lucky to have a guy like you!

[Harley (arbiter)]

thank you ^_^ im glad you liked it

[Lost in Wonderland]

no prob ^.^

[_]

Awww I am?? lol jk jk jk :P Awesome poem, i shall dedicate this to me kitty lol XD GREAT JOB! :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

xD nice one. thanks im glad ya liked it

[_]

welcome :D

[Abbie]

Amazing Harley.

[Harley (arbiter)]

did ya really like it? yay!

[Abbie]

of course I do! I love everything you write.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awh yay! I love your writing too!

[Abbie]

But yours I amazinger.

[Harley (arbiter)]

But! I could never write a book to save my life

[Abbie]

Not true! You could write a seven page children's book.... It could work. XD

But I can't write poetry worth jack. :P

[Harley (arbiter)]

If you helped me it would
And yes ya can.

[Abbie]

That could be possible ;)

And not really... XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeauh! :D
And yes but ok.

[Abbie]

:D
And I disagree

[Harley (arbiter)]

I disagree to your disagreeal and urge you to agree with my disagreeal of your disagreeal to agree.

[Abbie]

I disagree to your disagreeal to my disagreement and decline your offer to agree with your disagreealto of my disagreeal to your disagreement.

[Harley (arbiter)]

It was originally your disagreement not mine. And welp ya know what. I think you can write good. And you can't change my mind hun :p

[Abbie]

Dah! I'm confuzzled! You know what, screw the fancy annoying disagreeing and agreeing babe.

And true, I can't change how you think I'm a good writer, cute, or sweet.... :P ah well.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nope! Yes! My first win! XD

[Forever Hidden]

LOOOOOOOOOL LMFAO

[Abbie]

And only. -_- xD

I always win except for when I loose. And this time, you win, and I loose. But I won at loosing, so I'm still a winner. ;)

[Forever Hidden]

I'M THE WINNER!!! Back off guys XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

You have a great way of making it good for you hun. No offense that's good :D

[Abbie]

XD never!

And non taken babe. ;)

[Harley (arbiter)]

:D yay

[David the writer]

I know exactly how this feels!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks for reviewing glad you liked and connected with it

[David the writer]

totally np, thanx for sharing