School Needs To End

uh. kinda about ld relationships but can go for any

Author's Note

School has just begun
But I wish it was about to end
Wanna get home
So I can txt my girlfriend
Hey teach, I gotta run
'But school has just begun'
The clock tick tick's
I need to go
Time goes by so slow
These stupid pricks
To busy playing with their own dicks
To go out and meet some chicks
If they ever did then they would know
I need to go
Hurry up school and end
I wanna txt my girlfriend

Reviews

[Dearantlers]

Really good poem, and I'm with ya when ya say school needs to end! It really does. But where you say,
"To busy playing with their own dicks
To go out and meet some chicks
If they ever did then they would know"
Your rythm just slows down, and it feels off. Other than that, I love the poem!

[Freckled Princess]

Sassy and down to the point- nice job, Harley. ;)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank yooou! XD

[Abbie]

I love it Harley. Amazing poem that describes how anyone could feel when they are in a relationship that is long distance or the two people aren't close enough to see each other every day. Great job hon. ;D

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awh yay! You like it! Thank you babe! :D

[Abbie]

:) of course I do darlin'. :) and you are always welcome.