We are the Insane

collaboration with abbie.  yall should read her stuff its great. comments appreciated

Author's Note

Known far and wide
to show our krazy side

You give us weird looks
because of our actions and words

We think your nerds
and just boring turds

Many call us unstable
ever since we left the cradle

From the second that you meet us
you'll wish us hit by a bus

From the land we are native
we are called 'mentally creative'

If you ever take astray
you won't last a day

Were nowhere near tame
we are the mentally insane

Reviews

[Melody]

Lol. This was pretty awesome. XD I applaud both you and Abbie. Hahaha. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you mel

[Melody]

You're welcome Harley.

[Aehr]

awesome! gotta shelve this one!!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Steven Cash]

AQ RGUA ib tuw aiwua

oops, I meant, Ah yea, I saw this on the other

[Harley (arbiter)]

Mhm

[Matty Bosox]

Well...I must say honestly, you have done way better....This is very simple, it has a simple rythym...But on the other hand I must also say for a girl your age this is very good...Many people look at the different as insane or wierd and that is whats so great about it...Nobody wants to be a puppet, manaquin, or cookie cutter fake person...You make a great point of that what this poem...Good job!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

-_- Imma dude. And collaborations are harder than they seem. You are right though. Thank you for the review.

[Matty Bosox]

Sorry about that...I knew you were a guy I don't know why I said girl...I get soo many reviews every day...I'm very sorry about that...And I wasn't trying to insult your writing its just that I have seen writing from you that was better...Its not that this is bad by any means...Once again sorry about that buddy..

[Harley (arbiter)]

I understand. The mistake has been made before and I'm not mad. I know that you weren't and it was a good review as I said. You are true. All is fine

[lee von cleef]

and as the song goes"we are Jessy" and they all want our girl,because we can write think and play a base like a lead guitar.

[Harley (arbiter)]

thank you for the review.

[Lina Grey]

true words, my friend. Very true words.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[Abbie]

dude, my stuff isn't great... XD but thanks. and I think we DID do a rather good job on the poem! ;) and how did u get two reviews, when I only have yours? XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

About 200 read requests will help xD

[Abbie]

yeah, but I have 160.... how????? maybe ur friends are just all online or something....

[Harley (arbiter)]

Maybe

[Abbie]

nah... probably because ur awesomer than me..... I TOLD YOU YOU WERE AWESOMER!!!!!!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

And I disagreed

[Abbie]

and I un disagreed your disagreement!

[Harley (arbiter)]

And I un un disagreed your un disagreement to my disagreement

[Abbie]

well then!!!!!!! I un disagree on your un disagreement to my un disagreement to your un disagreement to my agreement!!!!!!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

I surrender

[Abbie]

ha! I win!!!!! I win I win I win I win I win I win I win I win I win I win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I always win. ;)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Not always hun

[Abbie]

I always win. Except for when I loose.

[Damien Davison]

I related to some of that, nice job though. Thanks for sharing.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks for reading

[_]

Indeed we are!!!!! However I'm perfectly stable *twitch twitch* See? lol Nah, my mind got sold on E-bay like other useless items. Great poem. :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol