Free?

No

this... this one is a weird one from me but i believe its true. 

Author's Note

Free
A bird flying high
Through the great blue sky
A hemi driving fast
With enough road and gas to last
A lone wolf with no 1 home
Just wherever he can roam
No

Nothing is free
We
All
Everything
Bonded to this dimension
Atoms molecules
Hold us down
Keep us around
The bird can fly
But eventually its wings will die
The hemi can roar
But same with the bird before
The wolf can run
But after a time it has no more fun
Because
Nothing is free
We
All
Everything
Bound to this dimension
But...
Until death?

Reviews

[captain]

a bit weir yet awesome!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank yoou!

[Crimson Bayonet]

Awesome write dude. I love the words you string together :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks you

[Lina Grey]

this is captivativating...i love the topic and the depth and how your words are independent phrases strung together, not sentences. this is really cool.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

oh my! dimensiality. I go crazy. All my atoms will decompose, and Carbon isotope! Aggghhh. lol j/k great write! ---mishe

[Harley (arbiter)]

I have no idea what you said but thanks for the review lol

[1809 Black Plague December]

lol you need chemistry. yep. lol totaly laughing, cruel world. lol

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah nice. I'm taking biology this year would that help? Lol and yes

[1809 Black Plague December]

you replied to your question, may be psychobiology. lol eeeeee lol cruel world.

[Freckled Princess]

Captivating... lyrical write. I like it. Speaking truth. Good job, friend.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write. We're free, it's a matter of perspective. Think of self as a spirit on a human adventure. We're not completely bound to the flesh.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nice

[That_Girl]

Hmm... an interesting one from you. But it works and I like it a lot. :) Good job!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks!

[Kaylor Mason]

You're right. Nothing's free in this world . . . especially not freedom

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you!

[_]

D: Well....that was a little heart breaking poor birdie!!! >_< Oh well not everything is happy mustard and crap! GREAT POEM! even though its sad, still good. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks I guess :D