Life

Don't just sit there

weird yeah but i like it. its not great but its cool to me. it was inspired by a book i was reading.in it there were scientists trying to make life longer and they died trying so thats where this poem came to mind from ^_^

Author's Note

Life is a war with god
And he's the best strategist around

We never win
Just end up 6 feet in the ground

Yet some still
Try not to die

To tell people around them
Not to cry

But it never works
And then; a life wasted

Trying to change
The date that was pasted

The one we all have
Its like a tab

When it comes
Don't die in a lab

Live life
while you still have a chance

Don't just sit there
Get out and dance

Reviews

[CLUTZ]

Some people spend so much time worrying about death they forget how to live. Great job.

[Aehr]

lovely message, and well done..
Keep Penning!!! :P

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Falling Leaf.]

Straightforward; a good message to live by. Well written, friend.

Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[Falling Leaf.]

No trouble