F**K YOU

Written with an "I don't care anymore" attitude

my little controlled vent. i have a few lol a chick i liked said she liked me then started going out with another guy and me and her have been on a merry go round and it felt like the same things were happening again and im tired of it and honestly dont know if i even still want anything to do with her because i stil care but she doesnt so why should i? anyway (ignore all that xD ) hope ya liked the poem

Author's Note

Were you going to tell me
Or leave me be
Wondering
If you were mine
But no
I'm just standing in line
While your with another guy
Fuck it I'm not going to cry
Anymore
I'm over you
Your through
Me too
I don't even know
If I still want to be friends
It would be the same ol' show
Its really getting old
You loved me
Then like a bro
Then loved me again
I don't even know
Honestly I'm tired of it
You don't give a shit
About me
Don't say you do
I know its a lie
You probably want me to die
SO
You might think I'm being mean
Actually this version is clean
Without further adeu
FUCK YOU

Reviews

[That_Girl]

Last two lines are perfect! Nicely done! Doesn't sound like she's really worth your time if all she does is mess around with you. :/ Good write though hun. :)

[Rob Santana]

HAHAHA, yeah boy!!!!!!!!!!! Tell it like it is. Good job,

[ramblingsofapoet]

brillant

[Soul Fire]

Very powerful and emotional excellent work

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Lol this made me laugh. Well she deserves all those harsh words. ;D she's a terrible person if she treats you that way. She's a little home wrecker. Have fun flaunting another girl in her face when he breaks up with her. :P nice poem though. Thanks for sharing. :P

[Harley (arbiter)]

XD she may deserve it, but I'm not that kinda person. Thanks for the review :D

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You should see what I'd do to a boy that did that to me. ;)

[afra]

wow you never told me that you could be a HULK some times ....well done

[Harley (arbiter)]

I hope that's a good thing xD thanks afra!

[afra]

its a good thing ....and welcome