F**K YOU

Written with an "I don't care anymore" attitude

my little controlled vent. i have a few lol a chick i liked said she liked me then started going out with another guy and me and her have been on a merry go round and it felt like the same things were happening again and im tired of it and honestly dont know if i even still want anything to do with her because i stil care but she doesnt so why should i? anyway (ignore all that xD ) hope ya liked the poem

Author's Note

Were you going to tell me
Or leave me be
Wondering
If you were mine
But no
I'm just standing in line
While your with another guy
Fuck it I'm not going to cry
Anymore
I'm over you
Your through
Me too
I don't even know
If I still want to be friends
It would be the same ol' show
Its really getting old
You loved me
Then like a bro
Then loved me again
I don't even know
Honestly I'm tired of it
You don't give a shit
About me
Don't say you do
I know its a lie
You probably want me to die
SO
You might think I'm being mean
Actually this version is clean
Without further adeu
FUCK YOU

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks everyone

[}Echo{]

Wow... Great poem. I like this. Epic write. Keep writing!

[lee von cleef]

That little baby ricochet ,one tough marine you have been reading is rubbing off on you, Go on there is another street car on every corner, but Damn! she rocked your world,you still wake up, What do you stand for? Now square your shoulders smile,you have that peak to write in your journal, and what a view, from standing on lifes mountain peaks.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks everyone

[Freckled Princess]

Anger, and frustration... all makes me think about the contempt and resentment that is within this poem. I like being able to feel that.
Good one.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! good one

[K-mo]

this is very good, poems that show your true emotions are always the best

[Kaylor Mason]

A very elegant sendoff to a rotting relationship . . . ah well, c'est la vie

[The Analog Kid]

Actually, I wish site like this existed when I was in the same boat as you. At least you have an avenue to vent about these things that happen to us all.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah man

[Melody]

I f*****g loved it. Good job, Harley. I agree with xXEmoEeyoreXx. She's not worth your time if she does nothing but mess with your emotions.

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks ^_^