I cant look back

this is all true until the line "we ride off into the sunset" and then it gets true again at "i leave with her"  hope yall like it

Author's Note

We always want the ones we can't get
I would have but I lost the bet

Your gone
I'm blue

Tried to move on
Find someone new

When I'm with her
I'm always thinking of you

She has all of your charms
And she's the one in my arms

But I want it to be you
Even though I know we're through

She's got eyes of the bluest skies
But can't give me those highs
You got me to with your eyes
Not to mention between your thighs

So why do I stay
This game I play
One day
I will have to pay

I know
I can't let go

But why chase dreams
When nothing is what it seems

I mount up and go
She doesn't know
I still love you so
But that, I can not show

Harley on Harley
With her holdin onto me

We ride off into the sunset
I'm so glad we met

Is what I say as I leave this town
Talking to you and all around

I leave with her
My eyes blur

I can't look back
Because if I did I couldn't keep on
Fighting a want of what I lack
And I couldn't stay gone

Reviews

[nigrum homonculus]

"You got me to with your eyes
Not to mention between your thighs"

if you used that as a pick up line. you sir win at everything in life. poem was great though. flowed nicely and you had some nice rhymes. defo a different 1 for you bro. well done!

[Harley (arbiter)]

xDDD lmao. thanks bro!

[Anthem]

I little bit of unpure thoughts...lol ..some good rhyming!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well were all umpure in some way xD thank you man

[A. V. Madison]

I agree with Emo Eeyore, you've got a mouth to be talking like that, dude!!! lol this is a cute and sad poem though. 100/100

[That_Girl]

Diiirty Harley. ;) lmao he always surprises me.

[Harley (arbiter)]

thank you :D

[A. V. Madison]

@Avy, yeah, you have no idea! Some of the things that have come out of his mouth.... I'm not even gonna go there!!! lol

[That_Girl]

Hahahaha I'm happy to remain blissfully unaware! XD jk jk

[Harley (arbiter)]

Dafuq you talking about? XD

[A. V. Madison]

@Harley, maybe the "dirty-joke-athon" we had once? lmao

[Harley (arbiter)]

That was more of a pun off than anything :p lol

[A. V. Madison]

Yeah, whatever ;P lol we spammed my review :( lol

[Harley (arbiter)]

Darn. Oh well

[That_Girl]

Ahhh all of a sudden I had 12 review comments... many from you two! :p

[Harley (arbiter)]

Only 5 were :p

[That_Girl]

Still... almost HALF... from ONE poem. :p

[Harley (arbiter)]

:D that means its awesome!

[A. V. Madison]

Welcome to my world, Avy.

[Harley (arbiter)]

At least y'all don't have 3 permanent review comments. It. Never. Leaves. O.O

[That_Girl]

D****t Harley! lol I doubt that. :p

Maddie- oh lord... you can have your world. ;) jk jk

[That_Girl]

I DO!!! From a poem of mine! And they are starting to build..

[Harley (arbiter)]

It. Stinks.

[A. V. Madison]

Same here, I'm stuck at 8 review comments.

[A. V. Madison]

They're like little stalkers.

[afra]

such a great write ....one of your best

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks! :D

[LittleLover]

I really like this poem, Especially these lines:
She has all of your charms
And she's the one in my arms

But I want it to be you
Even though I know we're through

Great job!! 100/100

[Harley (arbiter)]

thank you ^_^

[LittleLover]

No problemo ^_^

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a cute poem. I really enjoyed it. I loved the message in it. Being with someone you love is always great. I hope one day to find someone that loves me for me. That's what every body wants. Thanks for sharing.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[Angie Diane♥♥]

No problem. ;D

[That_Girl]

" You got me to with your eyes
Not to mention between your thighs" O.O I've never heard you speak like that! lol I love it though. Nice poem! Emotions are conveyed VERY well. Good job!

[Harley (arbiter)]

:D thank you

[That_Girl]

Anytime hun. :)