Jacob

Jacob

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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RIP

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I don't know you
But you're my brother

The one of two
That's six feet under

I wish we could have met
You'd be awesome I bet

A great guy
Why'd you have to die

Today, it's been 22 years
It's still bringing mom to tears

She can't move on
Her dear child gone

When we visit your tombstone
I leave y'all alone

Just mother and son
Who's life had just begun

You're in a better place
Held in God's grace



                      Jacob L. Earls
                             RIP







© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Its been 22 years since he died. I wish I could have known him.

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I'm so very sorry...
This is a great poem for him, and for your mother though. It's full of your emotions, I can tell.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you
It is good that you wrote this, it must help..if only a little...

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Yeah. Thanks
I'm sorry to hear about your brother.
Good poem, it could make a touching acoustic song.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks. But I want to keep it as is.
Aw this poem is so beautiful... It's so emotional and just so well written, like it just poured from your heart... It's amazing. Great job.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

thank you
Nice touching tribute to your brother.

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Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks man
The Analog Kid

12 Years Ago

yeah man
Beautiful write Harley - full of sincere emotion and recognition of your mom's grief

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Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you
New Dawn

12 Years Ago

You're welcome Harley - impressive writing despite the sadness of the subject
aww so sad ....i hope your mom feels better ....great write

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on September 1, 2012
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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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